My objective is always to create simple, exciting stories. Every beat, every page is geared toward increasing entertainment value for the audience. Available screenwriting services include drafting, rewriting, and polishing. Areas of focus include:

  • Improving or simplifying the concept

  • Boosting characters’ likeability and uniqueness

  • Clarifying characters’ goals and arcs

  • Establishing a central love story

  • Building a captivating setting

  • Punching up: humor, action scenes, peak emotional moments, scares/suspense, romance

  • Managing tone

  • Strengthening act breaks and anchor points

  • Improving logic, coherence, and clarity

  • Boosting pacing

  • Upping conflict and energy

  • Polishing dialogue

  • Formatting and grammar

Writing Samples


Premise: An ambitious logger agrees to work the rainforest at night for a big payday, despite rumors of a legendary ghost lurking.
Genre: Suspense

 


Premise: A penniless young playwright must use his creativity to win back his lost love, a Hollywood starlet who’s now engaged to a treacherous producer.
Genre: Drama / Romance

 


Premise: Two brothers at a Northeastern prep school accept a mysterious invitation to attend a faraway school of magic.
Genre: Adventure (prose sample)

 

Full versions are available upon request!